i need grammer improving?
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i need to improve the grammer between these signs (—-) below please
Natural fiber-reinforced composites with their favourable properties of strength, toughness, high modulus, low-cost, low density make them an attractive area of study for material scientists. (This coupled with the uniqueness of being an environmentally friendly option in that the fibers can be obtained from renewable sources; make natural fiber-reinforced composites a material for the future). Similarly, polymer-nanoclay composites have been widely investigated for their significant improvement in modulus, impact strength, barrier properties, heat resistance and thermal stability.
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This, coupled with the uniqueness of being an environmentally friendly option (the fibers can be obtained from renewable resources), make natural fiber-reinforced composites a material for the future.
If possible, I’d move "the fibers can be obtained from renewable resources" from that sentence to somewhere else. Perhaps…
Natural fiber-reinforced composites with their favourable properties of strength, toughness, high modulus, low-cost, low density, and ability to be made from renewable resources make them an attractive area of study for material scientists. This coupled with the uniqueness of being an environmentally friendly option make natural fiber-reinforced composites a material for the future. Similarly, polymer-nanoclay composites have been widely investigated for their significant improvement in modulus, impact strength, barrier properties, heat resistance and thermal stability.
This, coupled with the uniqueness of being an environmentally friendly option (the fibers can be obtained from renewable resources), make natural fiber-reinforced composites a material for the future.
If possible, I’d move "the fibers can be obtained from renewable resources" from that sentence to somewhere else. Perhaps…
Natural fiber-reinforced composites with their favourable properties of strength, toughness, high modulus, low-cost, low density, and ability to be made from renewable resources make them an attractive area of study for material scientists. This coupled with the uniqueness of being an environmentally friendly option make natural fiber-reinforced composites a material for the future. Similarly, polymer-nanoclay composites have been widely investigated for their significant improvement in modulus, impact strength, barrier properties, heat resistance and thermal stability.
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In sentence construction, try to make small easy to read sentences. Stay away from too many commas and too many properties in one long sentence. Keep it simple. It should be pleasant for the reader. It should be easily understood as to what you are saying.
Finally, check the spelling. For instance, in your question, grammer is spelled GRAMMAR.
See answers within brackets. Delete words between ~ and ~
Natural (,) fiber-reinforced composites (offer)~with their~ favourable properties (such as) ~of~ strength, toughness, high modulus, low-cost ~,~ (and) low density (.) (Therefore, they) make ~them~ an attractive area of study for material scientists. ~This coupled with the uniqueness of being an environmentally friendly option in that the fibers can be obtained from renewable sources; make natural fiber-reinforced composites a material for the future).~ (The natural fiber-reinforced composites are environmentally friendly and they come from renewable resources. Thus, it is the material of the future).
Similarly, polymer-nanoclay composites have been widely investigated for their significant improvement in modulus, impact strength, barrier properties, heat resistance and thermal stability
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